2004-11-06 [Ri'hala]: Well, there is my short story. Construcive Critisism is welcome, so let me know what you think ^_^.....oh and one other thing ...................................................................................................................................................................TELL ME THE TRUTH ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK I REALLY NEED TO KNOW BECAUSE THE STORY WON'T GET ANY BETTER IF YOU DON'T Thankies and enjoy ! ^_^

2004-11-07 [Schitz]: that's so sad... *grabs tissue*

2004-11-07 [Ri'hala]: nice to know someone cares <_< lmao ^_^

2004-11-08 [KnightAngel]: yeah.. sad... but very good!

2004-11-08 [KnightAngel]: good written i mean..

2004-11-08 [Ri'hala]: ha ha lol thankies for the comment ^_^

2004-11-08 [Ri'hala]: *wonders if anyone has cried Irl over this story yet <_<* *shifty-eyes* my dad did....heh...because he wuvs meh...<_<

2004-11-08 [Laidreal]: it totally sucks--JUST KIDDING! i luvs it ri! ^-^

2004-11-08 [Ri'hala]: thankies *laughs at the joke nervously* ^_^;;

2004-11-15 [Ri'hala]: come on i need reveiws! i need suggestions! *cackles and dies*